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forgive me for the messy
background, i just gotta thing for
those damn splatter brushes! :XD:

Toree sure loves her some polka dots...:B

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Deziree & Toree (c) me of course!

Critiques


:iconcrystalmask:
I've never given a critique before but i'll try my best xD I liked the way you drew the characters. Their pose and facial expresions are very well done. I especially liked the girl witht he black dress because her expresion has so much power! It looks like if she's saying "I'm a sexy lethal weapon" xD
Concerning coloring, the shading is very well done and i liked the colors you chose. They seem to clash with eachother as if saying that both characters are different (mentally).
I like the background because it seems to match the characters.
Overall it is very well done. The only thing that i found a little weird was the chest area of the girl with polka dots. One of her boobs seems a little too large. Maybe it's the dress?
Anyway, apart from that, AWESOME JOB!
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:iconmichithethird:
Amazing~ I love it!

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:iconasieybarbie:
thank you so much! :D

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:iconchiprocks1:
Great job. This would look sick as poster art on my wall. :headbang:

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:iconshalayna:
Beautiful, the colors you chose are like, "Wow!" I love how there's like a *Vintage* vibe from your style :D It's different, it's pleasant.

Totally in love with their hair. Like, wow. :love: :heart:

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:iconthetimedevourer:
The pattern on the dress is a little "cheap" if you ask me ;P But it fits the drawing perfectly, so I won't complain.

I love their eyes and their hair.
And don't apologize for the "messy" background. It kicks ass :lol:

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:iconcrystalmask:
lol i hope my critique wasn't too bad xD

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:iconcrystalmask:
i was trying to be formal in my critique so i didn't say this but WOW! Like chiprocks1 said, this would make a kickass poster! Or a kickass spy poster! (Admit it, they look like they're spies! xD)

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:iconkasaiinuyoukai:
I like this picture, it's a very good but I have a few complaints/suggestions.

First is what I like;

I like the fact that there are differing skin colors, even if it's only a few shades. Here on DA, I see a lot of people that either draw all white-ish pink characters, or yellowish-pale characters, I like that you have more variety than that.

I like the way you draw hair, with all the lines included. Having that extent of detail in hair, especially in curly hair, is a lot of work but it gives a sense of volume and direction of hair.

I like your anatomy, the bodies are exaggerated, but not ridiculous. They also have a sense of bone and muscle structure, which can destroy even the best art work.

The background also adds to the picture, without distracting the viewer from the characters.

Now complaints/suggestions;

The biggest complaint I have is the lighting/shading. There is none. The picture looks incredibly flat without shading, even just a little would improve this picture.

The next issue is with Toree, the dress implies that it doesn't go around the whole breast, yet there is no line from the uncovered cleavage. This just looks strange.

The last little tid-bit is the way you drew the mouths. I understand that it's probably just your style, but they have passed the point of big, they look a bit too much, now. Have you seen the lip-plumpers exposed ad? The lips are starting to look like that. You of course don't have to change your style, that's just the vibe I get from the mouths.

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